8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.
Thanks to Love Spanks relaxing the word limit rule, we're farther along in this scene then I expected :D. If you want a refresh first, here's the 1st snippet, here's three weeks ago (which is longer thanks to Love Spanks), two weeks ago, and then here is last week.
Scene set up: The Queen and Prince Synn arrived at the pool area in The Queen's mansion to find Raanan and his submissive Gaelan doing something sexual under the water. More fruits of my rewrite in this snippet where we mostly get The Queen and Raanan talking, but The Queen is a master (pun intended :D)
Update on this WIP- I finished the last rewrite to find myself over 80K words! It's been delivered to my BR so hopefully that'll mean I can get things going again on my re-release of Book 1 and blog tour and then Book 2.
"Why so flustered, my boy? We both know you like a good flogging." The Queen popped Raanan's ass with the flogger.
"Confused ... my... Queen."
"What you want, what Vala wants, what you'll allow, my Queen."
"Now was that so hard to say?" The Queen flogged the soles of Raanan's feet.